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Answer for Practice story writing on sample PPDT picture

Attempted By : lakshmiAnswered on : 29 Apr 2017
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1 A SPEEDING CAR HIT THE RICKSHAW . IT SEEMS THAT THE DRIVER WAS DRUNK. THREE PERSON INCLUDING THE RICKSHAW DRIVER ARE INJURED . CROWDS STARTED TO GATHERED. ONE OF THEM HAVE EVEN CALLED THE POLICE. OTHERS ARE TRYING TO HELP THE INJURED BY TAKING THEM TO THE HOSPITAL AND EVEN CALLING THEIR FAMLY MEMBERS.THE CAR DRIVER IS ALSO DETAINED . POLICE WILL TAKE THE CHARGE FROM THERE ON. POLICE TOOK THE DRIVER AND BOTH THE VEHICLES IN ITS CUSTODY .THE DRIVER WAS TAKEN TO THE COURT THE VERY NEXT DAY UNDER THE CHARGES OF DRUNK AND DRIVE . HE WAS INFACT PROVEN GUILTY . HE NOW HAS TO PAY 4 10000 TO EACH OF THE PERSON AND ALSO HE WAS SENTENCED TO ONE YEAR OF IMPRISONMENT . LUCKILY ALL THE THREE PERSONS SURVIVED THE ACCIDENT . BUT DRUNK AND DRIVE IS VERY DNGEROUS AND SHOULD BE AVOIDED UNDER ALL CONDITIONS.THANKS TO THE AWARENESS OF THE PUBLIC THAT ACTED SO FAST BY CALLING THE POLICE AND TAKING THE INJURED TO THE HOSPITAL.

Ananlysis

Story needs improvement. You need to clearly identify a hero in the story. Also the tense of the story switches from future and present to past. It is recommended to write story in simple past tense.
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